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Peer Revision 2/10


Peer revision may seem silly to you, but it is one of my favorite things. I like getting the input of other people. What may seem to flow good to you, may just be basic to someone else. When someone else is editing your paper, you can not let it hurt your feelings. They are just trying to help. Peer revising helps me to point out grammar errors that I would not be able to point out when scanning through.  I was able to find bigger vocabulary words through peer revision. This process is valuable to me because it helps us create better essays that flow better and have more meat to them. You want an essay with vivid detail that you can envision .It would make it more valuable if it was someone I did not know because I know they would not have any cloudy vision. Revision is important because it is to make your essay better. Peer revision is an important step in the writing process, because you do not want to have tunnel vision when it comes to revising your own essay.

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