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This illustration essay was a little tougher than my last essay. This essay involved me having to get references and using them to get information for my essay. This essay involved more examples. The last essay involved one scenario, however I had to think more deeply for the second essay. I was able to think about the last essay and just write it. For this essay, I had to prewrite. I created a web, an outline, and did some free-writing. It was a little harder to find the facts for this essay. I had to go through articles and find information that I found was interesting. I also had to find parts that validated the information I was trying to prove. The last essay was all about what I believed in, while this essay was more of illustrating and providing examples. I had to work on this essay longer than I did the first one because it required more work when writing it and making it flow together.

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